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A spiritual,

Harmony of Buddhist chants,

On top of the hills.
Another New Age music inspired haiku ritten by ur's truly.
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A beautiful haiku if I might say, the way you used the concepts and the idea to create something so complex and turn it to something so minimal it is amazing. I like the feeling that it gives, it has everything spirituality, meditation, Buddhist point of view and Light.

Above all, the last part is very interesting, yet it is not mentioned were exactly is this hill but this makes it a mysterious haiku in some ways because who knows where the Buddhist chants might be heard next. I like the way you used the words. A brilliant poem my friend. Thank you. Love and Light.