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The Bloody End

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An ending title card I thought could b useful 4 a team cut out animation I'll b makin with me team at uni.
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:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

As nice as this is, I think more effort could have been put in. It really looks like it's been rushed and you can see the glue and lines where you've drawn the letters. Maybe try spending more time on it? Maybe you could show your group first before putting it up on DeviantArt, being in your group it's a little insulting you'd put this on here instead of showing us first. Also it seems a little blank too, maybe more detail could have been added, such as blood. Though I have a feeling you're not going to allow this to even be seen as I've noticed you don't really take on any constructive criticism from anybody; student, teacher or friend. You just seem to ignore it. I know sometimes it's hard to hear the criticism about your work, but trust me it's needed if you want to improve and we're only trying to help you with that. I also don't understand why you've asked for a critique when you'll ignore most of what will be sent to you. END CAPTAIN'S LOG!